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Thursday 13 September 2018

WALT: use correct punctuation in our writing


Today we did a poem called Spring Things. We had to rule out a border and put lots of drawings about spring.

What I found exiting
Was writing the poem in my book.

What I found difficult
Was drawing all the pictures

What I might do next time
Is put my book over my screen so I don't have to keep looking up and down   

2 comments:

  1. Hi my name is Isaac.I am a student in room Manukau at Waikowhai Primary School. I like the way you did a poem about baby birds. It made me think of the birds out side my house. Maybe next time you should do a poem on dogs. If you want to take a look at my blog it is here http://wpsisaack.blogspot.com/

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